Use this template to guide your review of your partner’s essay. Answer all questions here, and feel free to add additional notes outside of the categories below.

REMEMBER: Be respectful of the work your partner has put in. Treat your partner as you like to be treated.

Does the essay follow the task? How do you know this? [Look at the assignment itself and the guidelines given.]

   I believe that the essay does follow the task so far you do a great job at giving background information and attacking ideas. The subheadings allow the reader to understand what they are about to read and you provide great evidence towards your claim.

Locate the thesis–and say it in your own words to be sure you understood it.

Now find the topic sentences. Does each topic sentences sum up or introduce its paragraph effectively?

As far as structure you also do a great job at that in which you explain that yes while antibiotics are very important at the same time there is a large misuse when it comes to them and a large misconception as well.

Is evidence being used for any and all statements made? Does the author introduce, analyze, and explain the evidence? What’s the strongest piece of evidence?

 You use evidence for most of the statements you made and do provide some kind of analysis. I believe the best evidence you use is “Alejandro et al. found that despite

the prevalence of antibiotic use from the sheer is also the gateway to antibiotic misuse from the overprescription of antibiotics on the physicians’ part. For instance, shave specifically antibiotic and not just put them under the light of being an all-curing” This is great because it supports the claim and thesis

Does the paper read smoothly? Are there parts that seem out of place or confusing? (Mark these. Give suggestions if possible.) Add any transitions that would make the organization smoother.

 The paper does read smoothly and nothing seems out of the ordinary thus far.

Write what you consider:

1.      the clearest sentence

However, the widespread use of antibiotics has always garnered its subsequent misuse. The looming presence of antibiotic misuse has been an enduring issue for children’s immune health, parent-physician relationship, and parent’s themselves, who are responsible for arming aiding their children

2.      the most confusing sentence

This is evident in An equally important aspect for researchers in analyzing Western Australia directly as opposed to other states was the varying ranges in high and low socioeconomic statuses affecting the prevalence of acute respiratory infections (ARIs). ARIs ,

Note here any suggested changes in wording, grammar, punctuation, or spelling:

What single change would make the most improvement in this essay?

The only thing I would change is I would just you know formulate some of the evidence into you own words so that it isn’t too confusing.